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Broken Sunrise

Postby Eian » Mon Aug 29, 2011 11:19 pm

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The story:

The year is 2032. Mankind has moved in these last 32 years much more than what anyone could have imagined. However the biggest thing that has happened to mankind was not any technological advancement, but the succesfull contact with aliens.
2 other races are now known to travel the universe with humans...the Maians (also known as the "greys" for those who have heard of the old abduction stories) who are an advanced and peacefull race, observing human development for ages, and the Skedar, Religious fanatics who have set their eyes on the conquest of other planets and races, using brutal weaponry and merciless tactics that have proven succesfull over and over again to take out and exterminate other less prepared races.
This contact would not have been possible had it not been for the efforts of the Carrington Institute, wich not only managed to create a succesfull relationship with the Maian culture, but also managed to break a conspiracy the skedar planed to take over an ancient weapon stuck on earth. These feats wouldn't have been possible were it not for their top agents, including the now legendary Joanna Dark.
9 years have passed since that time. The Carrington institute has expanded into something more than just a shadow organisation, it has become the main source and form of contact of the world with the maians, creating a peacefull bond with both races, and has also created a permanent defense against the skedar, should they ever try to attack our planet or our allies ever again, with extensive preparation and knowledge. However...there could not have been enough preparation that could have helped us fight off what was to come....

You're an agent of the institute. Wether you've prooved yourself in another organization, been personally trained by the institute, or a combination of both, you have shown the skills required to enter it's newest program, Broken Sunrise, a training program devised to create the perfect agents. People who would become as skilled and as proficient as Agent Dark to face new, terrible threats that cannot be beaten alone.
Your last training mission before entering action is today. You've not been told "what" you will be facing for your first serious assignment, but something seems familiar about this and the past events that took over 9 years ago.
Remember your training agent...you will need to use every little bit of it if you want to survive the things to come.

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Allright guys, as you can probably tell by now, this is a Perfect Dark based RP. set in the future after the events of the original perfect dark (and not taking in mind the novels technically speaking)

INFORMATION THAT WILL BE REQUIRED:

Name: your name, obviously :P
Age: The institute does not let anyone underaged enter combat, so obviously this must be over 18
Sex: this one's rather obvious, just state what gender you are (in the case someone wants to make a transexual or herm character, there's no restriction here, though a little bit of detailing in the bio to avoid confusion would be nice)
Species: anthro or human, it's entirely up to you. if you want to be a Maian however you'll have to run it through me to see if it can fit into the story/idea of this RP.
Weapon of choice: as a member of the institute you're supposed to be at the least "decent" with every gun, but all are allowed a signature weapon, wich can be customized or not.
Appearance: your physical looks, like what build you have, what color of eyes, hair and fur. etc. what you look like in both your Institute agent clothes (armor/clothes/gadgets/etc.) and in your civilian clothes (yes, this will be required since you will be undercover agents in more than one occasion)
Biography: where'd you come from, what's your story, why did the institute pick you. etc. please, try to not make something that has to do with one of the main characters (in other words, no sons of daniel carrington or something like that. It would disrupt the lore as well as the storyline)

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My character (edited slightly):

Name: Eli Valerian
Age: 22
Sex: Male
Species: Snow leopard.
Weapon of Choice: a personalised Falcon 2, with a compensator on the barrel wich allows for a silencer and it's own green laser sight instead of the standart red. the frame is still silver but it has the institute's mark on both sides of the slide.
Appearance: light and muscular, with a combination of black and white fur. His hair is shaggy, short and brown colored. one of his eyes is green, the other has been replaced with a cybernetic eye that acts as his HUD in most missions, this one is also green, although it obviously stands out the fact that it's cybernetic. During Institute missions Eli wears a black buttoned Tshirt with a lightweight bulletproof vest with baggy blue pants and blue sneakers. most of his equipment is carried on a pouch that is at the back of his waist (slightly tilted to the left for easy acess) his Falcon 2 is on a pistol guard on his right legt as he's right handed.
Off the institute missions or undercover he is usually seen wearing a brown leather jacket with a white hoodie under it, Jeans and combat boots, he still keeps his gun but he has it concealed under his jacket, to avoid any trouble.
Biography: Natively Spanish, Eli's parents have worked for the institute for a very long time, so it was only natural that their son would have pursued to work on the same location. however, since he's not exactly what you could call a brilliant man (far from it some would say) he was forced to work more on the field than on the development of weaponry, gadgets and inteligence for the institute. Spending most of his teenage years on training, virtually and physically on the institute grounds, Eli has proven he has what it takes to make for a good agent for the institute. Looking up to both of his parents who work at the research and development department. but also to Agent Dark, who is now his training officer in the Broken Sunrise program.

He was picked for Broken sunrise not for his long connection to the institute, but because of his determination to see every mission through to the end on the VR programs and ability to improvise when the situation goes south.


This is only the second RP i've tried creating...so i'm open to sugguestions, criticism, etc. (i know i must've done a mistake or two in the grammar department at the very least >.<)
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Re: Broken Sunrise

Postby Poliwirl100 » Tue Aug 30, 2011 1:21 am

I SHALL JOIN.....tomorrow lol

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Re: Broken Sunrise

Postby aires163 » Tue Aug 30, 2011 4:43 pm

Name: Kevin Fernandaz
Age:22
Sex:M
Species:human (White)
Weapon of choice: laptop gun. Has a special over the shoulder bag to carry both it, and his real laptop.

Appearance: some what shorter than average. Dosent look very tough, jet black hair, green eyes, typically looks grumpy,
His civilian outfit consists of blue jeans, brown sneakers, grey shirt, and a red hoodie, he wears a pair of specialized sun glasses which act as his HUD and are capable of night/thermal vision, his outfit on mission consists of black and dark blue sneaking suit, it has a few metal plates in it for stoping a bullet, his hands are covered by black leather gloves, and he wears a dark blue ski mask, he is also wearing a backpack which is big enough to carry all the equipment he needs with some extra space as well.

Bio: Kevin parents died in a car crash when he was very young, an incedent that saddens him to this day. After a miserable school life he found a passion in the field of computers and joined datadyne as one of their hackers/field grunts. One day he accidentally got into his bosses files and found out just how expendable he was. He soon quiet and joined the U.S. army and learned to use and handle a wide variety of weapons. He latter received an offer to join the carrington institute, an offer gladly accepted. He proved to be a fast learner in the use of the institutes assortment of gadgetry. He was picked for the broken sunrise program because of his skill with computers.
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Re: Broken Sunrise

Postby Eian » Tue Aug 30, 2011 10:58 pm

Aires: your character is ok, but i would preffer a little bit more development on the bio part...it just feels a tad bland

also since i know not many people have played the original perfect dark, i have a little thing planned, as we advance through and we see something like a weapon, character, or race that needs a quick explanation/profile i'll do something like this

*example*

[LOG ENTRY UPDATED]
WEAPONRY - FALCON 2 PISTOL.
File Picture. Without silencer or 2X scope attachments
Image

A firearm with almost a decade in full service in the institute. A true marvel of modern firearm technology with little to none recoil and a good caliber to match.
The institute has taken this as their standard firearm for Agents, as well as earning some fame amongst them thanks to it being Joanna Dark's favourite weapon.
The reliability of this gun is such that any errors when firing it are entirely the user's fault and not a weapon malfunction.
Reload times are fast thanks to it's simple design. Ammo capacitiy is 8 bullets per magazine.


*end of example*

what do you guys think?
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Re: Broken Sunrise

Postby aires163 » Wed Aug 31, 2011 7:24 pm

There I edited it. If it's still not good enough I'll take another crack at it.
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Re: Broken Sunrise

Postby Eian » Wed Aug 31, 2011 9:24 pm

yes, that's better, thanks :P

i want at the very least 1 or 2 people more before this starts obviously, 2 people for one RP is too low
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Re: Broken Sunrise

Postby Kiva Darkbane » Mon Sep 05, 2011 1:27 am

i will join :D (if that is ok) but as of now i can only keep on eye open. XD

Name: Kyra Tenka
Age:18
Sex: Female
Species: Pink Fox
Weapon of choice: two double barrel one handed Shotguns, the shotguns goes on a holder behind my back.

Appearance: (like my avi) with brown belt that the shotgun holder is on. on my left shoulder is a tattoo of two crescent moons the smaller inside one is facing inside. in the middle is a rain drop making ripples and the ripples flow through the moons. Red eyes, and three small gold hoops earrings run down my right ear.

Bio: Ashley (or ash) was the daughter of a rich "game designer" or so she was told, he actually created the most advance firewall of all time, if it was hacked or broken through it would force out any one inside and plant a virus that would crash the hard drives, a self destruct button if you will, and then it would reset it self and "morph" the firewall again so it cant be hack the same way twice. He was a hero, until his reason behind making it became very clear. he had gave it to the president for all his impotent files, then he hacked past his own firewall to shut down the presidents files. when in court he was asked why, what was his motive. hes reply? simply because he could. so with Ash's fox father away and her cat mother having to work to jobs Ash was free to do most anything she wanted. so after a lot of getting in trouble and he always escaping the cops finally one day took her to a secret training facility. Ashley still wonders if her mom even noticed or cares shes gone. . .

(ok im like really proud of this bio :D its like MY best yet :) )

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Re: Broken Sunrise

Postby Poliwirl100 » Tue Sep 06, 2011 1:29 am

Poliwirl100 wrote:I SHALL JOIN.....tomorrow lol

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^ I mean it this time XDD
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Re: Broken Sunrise

Postby Eian » Tue Sep 06, 2011 6:34 pm

Stryker, two things i'd like you to fix

A) your equipment, a crossbow a shotgun AND a reaper seems too much for me. i'd say get rid of the reaper as a minimum, it's a skedar gun in any case and the institute wouldn't have access to so much skedar weaponry that they could just give it to agents in the field.

and B) grammar in your bio :P it's messed up man, fix it up a little so it's easier to comprehend
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Re: Broken Sunrise

Postby Buzzwolf » Tue Sep 06, 2011 8:58 pm

Name: Natasha Shianov
Age: 21
Sex: Female
Species: Anthro Black Fox
Weapon of choice: A pair of custom black Walther .45's, with removable 'soda can' silencers. is highly proficient in the use of high power rifles when the situation calls for it.

Appearance: Stands at just above an even five foot, her fur is a pure charcoal black, aside from a singular arcing stripe running from her right foot, wrapping around her leg as it climbs up her body, around her stomach and chest, around her neck, and down her left arm, the 'stripe' is a white with a faint bluish tint to it. Her eyes are a rich, viberent gold, surrounded by a pure gloss black. Her hair is shoulder length, black , tossed over one eye and left to hang in the back. it seems to have a 'matte' finish similar to that of her fur, with no visible shine whatsoever. Regular attire includes a heavy russian trench coat, complete with heavy fur and leather, encompassing the pair of 'D's' she carries beneath it. beneath she's either wearing a 'spec ops' style, skin tight suit, with built in 'reactive kevlar'(strips of material that are soft under normal circumstances, but harden in the vicinity of specific elements). it holds the appearance of a wetsuit, only with belts and utility clips for her gear. undercover/ civvies include, a tight fitting tank top(various colors and designs), and a pair of ragged jeans and black leather combat boots that she can hide a small knife and pistol under and in (Leg holster for conceal carry of a five round .357 double action Ruger, and a sheath built into the boot for a medium sized knife). she also has a pair of small rectangular reaging glasses she begrudgingly wears on occasion

Biography: She's Russian. Her parents were both soviets to the core back during the wars, and worked as assassins for the shadow governments long before such things were considered to be something of a norm. Natasha grew up in a family that was never there. her parents were considered to be the top agents, and as such, she was often left for days with other family, or even social workers that worked for the agency. She grew up as an agent of the program. she learned and absorbed every piece of knowledge they threw at her. everything she needed to be 'the perfect agent'. but as all perfection goes, perfect is impossible. perfect is flawed. and she was just as flawed. it showed, always trying to live up to being 'absolutely perfect' left her mind a bit unstable at times, as normal as she behaves in the day to day, just the right situation can send her into a 180 in a blink and all hell breaks loose. She was selected for the Program shortly after joining Section 15 of her organization. putting her as the 'frontman', the best they had to offer to become as close to 'perfect' as Black once had.
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I'll be honest....I completely lost track of where I was going with that bio...it doesn't make much sense even to ME...basically, section 15 shadow government agent gone a little bit crazy...basically XP Lemme know if there's anything I need to fix
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Re: Broken Sunrise

Postby Eian » Tue Sep 06, 2011 11:17 pm

Allright....your character seems ok to me Buzz. The section 15 thing could even be developed in the RP, but i haven't tought that far in yet...

Either way, we have enough people for the RP now, so i'll whip something out for tomorrow, if anyone wants to modify anything you should do so right now (and Stryker i still say, no Reaper. even in the game that weapon is too uncontrollable and rare)
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Re: Broken Sunrise

Postby Kiva Darkbane » Wed Sep 07, 2011 12:11 am

I fixed it :) And now I have a New Phone :D :D So I can check furthia all the time and find out when it's my turn :)
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Re: Broken Sunrise

Postby Poliwirl100 » Wed Sep 07, 2011 8:25 pm

I have it all figured out but the bio DX
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Re: Broken Sunrise

Postby Eian » Wed Sep 07, 2011 8:43 pm

i was about to go make the actual IC post, but i can wait for you if you want. PM me if you want help with it Dusk :P
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Re: Broken Sunrise

Postby Poliwirl100 » Thu Sep 08, 2011 1:38 pm

Eian wrote:i was about to go make the actual IC post, but i can wait for you if you want. PM me if you want help with it Dusk :P


Alright I'll pm you what i have and see if we can come up with a theme or something
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