Cold Storage

[Kiva Darkbane]

we'll i'm back, from a weird kinda depression and having no drive to get on here (i apologies)

during my absence i had a new direction for this rp (and just to see if your reading this all ill say now buzz the post is great)

now for the E.S im going to show you a bit more of what they are like there not a big part. YOUTUBE AWAY!!!
(Must watch) the es is the ship they fly in, it changes to a. . . well you see in the clip) oh and its a rp spoiler (WERE GOING TO SPACE!)
YouTube Link

[Buzzwolf]

Stryke...please, for the love of GOD...tell me you aren't simply throwing things together as you go...I only say this cause it started out that people were getting frozen for crimes they'd committed(to which most don't seem like they're actually 'bad guys' at all), then reawakened to work as a special squad with gundam type machines, and now we're going to visiting space...please...just tell me you've got some kinda line of thought goin here...

And shit man...if yer gonna use Xenosaga as a reference...at least use the ACTUAL anime, that was THE worst dubbing job I've seen in a long time...

[Kiva Darkbane]

And shit man...if yer gonna use Xenosaga as a reference...at least use the ACTUAL anime, that was THE worst dubbing job I've seen in a long time...

lol thats from the video game. and im mixing the game and nano braker. but ye i have a time line, i actually got upset last night because its going to take FOREVER to get to the good main stuff lol but thats how Rps go.

[Buzzwolf]

And shit man...if yer gonna use Xenosaga as a reference...at least use the ACTUAL anime, that was THE worst dubbing job I've seen in a long time...

lol thats from the video game. and im mixing the game and nano braker. but ye i have a time line, i actually got upset last night because its going to take FOREVER to get to the good main stuff lol but thats how Rps go.

I've seen and played the game as well as watched the whole anime... I dont remember ANY of it being that badly dubbed...or executing like that...something about that story seems utterly off...

Anyway! No worries on the bumping the post as Thoth I'd already gone, I can work ahead and behind an event post, actually makes it easier to get it moving cause we don't have to do all the intro shit then move to the next place before getting started...

Tambrias a little crabby before her morning coffee XP

[Kiva Darkbane]

Anyway! No worries on the bumping the post as Thoth I'd already gone, I can work ahead and behind an event post, actually makes it easier to get it moving cause we don't have to do all the intro shit then move to the next place before getting started...

oh good, glad its ok. and dont worry its my own knock off. it will work out hopefully. . .

[Kiva Darkbane]

two things. one, buzz don't kill me.
two, i love this quote "You military and your stupid little experiments. Can't just shoot shit like a good little soldier and every other nation on the planet." it made me roflmao

[Kiva Darkbane]

ill post tomorrow, got home late from work and gotta be up early tomorrow, cusin got home from his mission.

[Buzzwolf]

No offense stryke, but you have seriously gott work on your plot character to player character interactions...so often it feels like you're forcing the story along regardless of what the players do(not just this RP, mind you) or that you create npc's to fill a simple question that given the circumstances, probably shouldn't have happened(like the guard walking in with a pitcher of hot water IMMEDIATELY after shades char had asked for it. I'm still working out kyra's part in all this...but already it's feeling like a spontaneous add for a hole you didn't have planned to ever fill, being Torq asking about the story that was left to be 'filled in later', now if ya had it planned, good on ya, it just feels like it was kinda spur of the moment, which isn't really bad either if you found a spot to fill that you'd wanted to fill or didn't know how previously, or such. Hell, it could be just a spur of the moment idea to enhance the story! It really doesn't matter to me, all I'm saying is, make it feel like it was part all along...Like it was part of the plan, but at the same time, you have to be able to adapt to developments that your player characters create or make through their action...and I garuntee, I will be putting this skill to the test with what I have planned out for Torq XP As my drill instructor used to say, fake it till ya make it XP

[Kiva Darkbane]

i am sorry, my problem is i have a good idea and i love it but its a mid-rp idea so i try and hurry to the part i like. i need to slow down. the water was a bit odd. i liked staring it but mid post i forgot about it. ill take it out. and kyra? . . well. . . my mps said she wanted in. (not clinically) anyway ill make a char sheet for her. i'm sorry about this thank you for bringing it to my attention ill try and slow down. after all i do want this to last. . .

[Buzzwolf]

Stryke....where'd ja go man? Ya gotta stay on top oaths RP if you want it to make it out of the infancy stage, and not end up dying on the first page like your last one did...we're waiting on you man...

[Kiva Darkbane]

well im back. i desided i need to stop making rp's i always end up leaving anyway XD

[Kiva Darkbane]

THIS RP WILL NOW DIE!!! (i hope)

i started again. no i have no gf and parents getting devorced and no homework i'll have no destractions right? correct