Broken Sunrise

[Kiva Darkbane]

lol ok so i have no idea what to do so i'll wait for dusk lol because i was reading that post and was like ". . . now what is going on XD" but im ok now.

[Eian]

Buzz, Her name's Joanna, no H in the middle . I know it can be confusing but that's how it's written in the game

[Kiva Darkbane]

I know my flashback is odd and has many holes. i plan on doing them every time i post and its to small. so the pieces will all fit together. this will also help me because i never do any good at making Bios so this is how i make up for it.

Eien i Switched my weapon(s) will you make sure its ok before i edit it in the IC?


AND buzz i want your opinion on how my flashback in the IC was (i ask you because you always critic not criticize)

[Buzzwolf]

I'll be honest...it actually had a pretty good roll goin...right up till her dad got sued by the president himself for hacking the CIA....yeah...that doesn't happen...ever. You hack the CIA, you don't get sued. They come and take anything that has tech, or any possibility of connecting to the Internet...and you vanish....it's kinda what they're really good at...there's no suing.

And I'm seriously hoping you've got some serious backstory stuff for her killing her mom rather than the guy raping her...cause I can't think of any reason whatsoever for that scenario to play out like that...let alone for a 17 year old girl to always be carrying a shotgun around...or to school for that matter...that's not generally considered normal...

An sorry bout that Eian, I blame mah iPhone spell check...it likes fucking with words like that...

[Poliwirl100]

OMFG I was on like once for two minutes earlier DX gimme a day jeebus

[Kiva Darkbane]

I'll be honest...it actually had a pretty good roll goin...right up till her dad got sued by the president himself for hacking the CIA....yeah...that doesn't happen...ever. You hack the CIA, you don't get sued. They come and take anything that has tech, or any possibility of connecting to the Internet...and you vanish....it's kinda what they're really good at...there's no suing.

And I'm seriously hoping you've got some serious backstory stuff for her killing her mom rather than the guy raping her...cause I can't think of any reason whatsoever for that scenario to play out like that...let alone for a 17 year old girl to always be carrying a shotgun around...or to school for that matter...that's not generally considered normal...

i know i have reasons. next flashback will explain more. and for all Ashley knows its school *hint hint* oh and he wasn't raping her that is how she paid for rent. . . well i guess that time it was rape because she just got offered a job. to many hole to explain now just know answers will come.

[Buzzwolf]

Then like I said, the big problem then was the being sued by the president himself and the bit with the CIA...a hacker getting into the CIA network won't simply be taken to court...they vanish...don't exist anymore...poof. It's like the aliens, or the hand of god came and wiped them from the face of the earth...

[Kiva Darkbane]

lol calm down buzz it will be all explaned.

[Buzzwolf]

Riiiiight.....like I was saying...getting sued by the president...it doesn't happen...there's no explaining to do...I get that there's some mysterious background with the classes an shit...but being sued by the president doesn't happen...there are no circumstances that warrant that...

[Eian]

Okay, settle down, i'll put this to a close since after all i'm leading the RP.

I agree with buzz, there's just no way you hack the CIA's files and they would sue you making it public and making asses out of themselves.

On the other hand, you seem to have some plan for the character in the big end, so here's how i think you could "maybe" fix this.

instead of a public suing and questioning, they could have taken the father prisioner and make him banish from any and all records, making the whole "unexistant" thing still go, while your story remains somewhat untouched apart from the fact the whole deal wasn't made public, wich is after all the only way Ashley wouldn't have known about her father's actual dealing either.

That way, it makes sense organization speaking, and it keeps your character's background and family still about the same.

Are we clear on this?

[Poliwirl100]

Anyway my post is up so feel free to continue -relief face-

[Kiva Darkbane]

AHHHH guys have faith. you don't have the full story you only have what Ashley and the mom knew so far. do not worry. this is back when she was young. really trust me. iv thought this through.

no offence and thanks for the worry and all but i will fix it. and in the end if it don't work then ill change it ok? but for now just come along for the ride. everything has a reason.

[Eian]

it just sounds...well, confusing, convoluted even. I can't really find a train of tought in it so far myself at least

[Kiva Darkbane]

Well i have a . . . different train of thought. it all put together. there is also story between her eight year old self and her 17. ill fill it all in. there is a lot. should last me maybe. . . 5 or 6 more posts if i do a story every post. . . biggest Bio ever !!!

[Buzzwolf]

Oi...stryke..sorry...Ashley...it's not a matter of trying to explain it away...the president CANNOT sue another American while in office. It can't happen. The CIA is practically hand of fucking GOD when things like that happen. There's no if ands or buts about it. The only other option, that apperantly a lot of people opt out of, is to work FOR the CIA preventing others trying what you've dine. Even then, you're under close surveillance...but being sued by the president himself, is not an option....period. Game over. Do not pass go, do not collect $200. It cannot happen.